2014考研英語二小作文高分范文及批改:求職信2_跨考網(wǎng)
考研英語待批改作文:
8-10分
Dear Mr. Yu,
I just read an advertisement in job-hunting website about recruiting some positions of your company. I would like to apply for a position as a software engineer.
I understand it is essential to master a solid foundation for computer science. My professional skills, as described in the enclosed resume, are well suited to your requirement. I am a recent graduate of Peking University with a bachelor degree in Computer Science. In addition to having taken a broad range of courses, I served as an intern at a company where I have attained a fair knowledge and experience.
I will be happy to meet with you at your convenience and discuss how my education and experience match. Thank you for your consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
考研英語作文批改點評如下:
Dear Mr. Yu,
I just read an advertisement in(改為on) job-hunting website about recruiting some positions of(改為for) your company. I would like to apply for a position as a software engineer.
I understand it is essential to master a solid foundation for(改為of) computer science. My professional skills, as described in the enclosed resume, are well suited to your requirement. I am a recent graduate of the(刪除) Peking University with a bachelor degree in Computer Science. In addition to having taken a broad range of courses, I served as an intern at a company where I have attained a fair knowledge and experience.
I will be happy to meet with you at your convenience and discuss how my education and experience match. Thank you for your consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
8分
同學你好,要注意控制字數(shù),考研的時候超過20個詞扣0.5分,超過50詞只給1分辛苦分。標點符號與后面的單詞空一格。你的作文沒有大問題,但是你對介詞的使用不太清楚,這說明你的語感還不太好,因此,建議你多讀一些英文書籍。
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